User contributions for 98.210.208.107

18 February 2011

• 10:1210:12, 18 February 2011 diff hist −346‎ Exoplanet ‎ Completes edit
• 10:0110:01, 18 February 2011 diff hist −321‎ Exoplanet ‎ minor copy edit w/o changing meaning on innocent WP:PEACOCK language
• 08:3708:37, 18 February 2011 diff hist +374‎ Talk:Murder by Death ‎ →‎Trivia note: new section
• 08:3308:33, 18 February 2011 diff hist +210‎ Talk:Murder by Death ‎ spoiler

17 February 2011

• 23:0123:01, 17 February 2011 diff hist −668‎ Halibut ‎ Copy edit with no particular change in meaning. Rmv WP:OVERLINKING. Rmv innocent WP:PEACOCK. Rmv uncited subject opinion about group whose fees are "too high". Rmv unencyclopedic WP:SPAM ext link
• 12:5412:54, 17 February 2011 diff hist −171‎ Kerning ‎ Removes trivial blog reference. Changes "used primarily for caps" to "widely used for caps" I regularly use kerning for all letters, in fact, it's hard not to kern that way in MS Word
• 12:5112:51, 17 February 2011 diff hist −73‎ Kerning ‎ removes a short, somewhat trivial reference in German whose encyclopedic importance could easily be included in article

16 February 2011

• 07:0707:07, 16 February 2011 diff hist −29‎ Brudenell Social Club ‎ Modifies peacock claim to be "one of the most important" that was not supported by reference.
• 07:0607:06, 16 February 2011 diff hist +33‎ Jerry Kasenetz ‎ Nothing here that is obviously notable

10 February 2011

• 01:0901:09, 10 February 2011 diff hist +925‎ Talk:Mary Bell ‎ Released because society as a whole made the decision

9 February 2011

• 23:5623:56, 9 February 2011 diff hist −150‎ Wizardry 8 ‎ Removes external WP:SPAM link that is less about the game, than a promotion for individuals who worked on game
• 23:5323:53, 9 February 2011 diff hist −1,286‎ Wizardry 8 ‎ Removes WP:OVERLINKING. Partial copy edit. Removes "overlong" part of tag. Removes WP:SPAM extermal links

8 February 2011

• 12:4412:44, 8 February 2011 diff hist −64‎ Eugène-François Vidocq ‎ removes WP:OVERLINKING

30 January 2011

• 14:3714:37, 30 January 2011 diff hist −900‎ United States Bullion Depository ‎ Reduces WP:OVERLINKING. Removes WP:PEACOCK about security. Removes oh-gee-whizz statement about the size of gold ever mined, perhaps relevant to gold article, not here Tag: references removed

28 January 2011

• 20:4820:48, 28 January 2011 diff hist −76‎ A Touch of Frost ‎ removes duplicate sentence.

27 January 2011

• 10:2910:29, 27 January 2011 diff hist −18‎ Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch ‎ Corrects "model" sentence which itself was sloppy writing

26 January 2011

• 16:5116:51, 26 January 2011 diff hist −956‎ Self-heating food packaging ‎ Rmv para - apparently promotion for someone's paper, supporting trivial point w/o necessarily representing topic as a whole. Removed COI tag. Article seems neutral and informative, after copy edit. Tag: references removed

20 January 2011

• 05:4205:42, 20 January 2011 diff hist +1‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ format fix
• 05:4105:41, 20 January 2011 diff hist +610‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ Fetishes
• 05:3405:34, 20 January 2011 diff hist +325‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ Lede citations are not appropriate, agreed.
• 05:0905:09, 20 January 2011 diff hist +704‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ Selecting issues
• 05:0105:01, 20 January 2011 diff hist +62‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ adds citation matching article's cite
• 04:5704:57, 20 January 2011 diff hist +895‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ Answer to Tagishsimon ... not ignoring Masem, just haven't read comment yet.
• 04:3804:38, 20 January 2011 diff hist +335‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ Replaces Masem's comment
• 04:3704:37, 20 January 2011 diff hist +914‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ Response (followed by addition of Masem's comment removed by Edit Conflict)
• 04:1504:15, 20 January 2011 diff hist +556‎ Wikipedia:Village pump (policy) ‎ →‎Featured article demonstrates Wiki failure

19 January 2011

• 23:4423:44, 19 January 2011 diff hist +719‎ Wikipedia:Village pump (policy) ‎ Wiki's pragmatic failures
• 23:3823:38, 19 January 2011 diff hist +348‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ →‎Original Research and Wikipedia's Failure
• 23:2223:22, 19 January 2011 diff hist +1,245‎ Talk:Sacrifice (video game) ‎ Not worth featuring anywhere
• 14:4714:47, 19 January 2011 diff hist −273‎ Judas Iscariot ‎ Trims a couple dozen words of unsubstantiated WP:PEACOCK and unneeded verbiage, but makes no particular change to meaning.
• 13:4213:42, 19 January 2011 diff hist −319‎ Why did the chicken cross the road? ‎ Removes original research hyperbole, and also the tag, requesting a reference for questionable hype. Removes bizarre, tagged "series" comment.
• 13:3713:37, 19 January 2011 diff hist −18‎ Too Many People ‎ (OR commentary by Noahwalkthisway)
• 13:3013:30, 19 January 2011 diff hist −264‎ Too Many People ‎ Removes uncited original research about which songs each of the Beatles intended as commentary about the others. Hardly encyclopedic, without specific quote from writer, and maybe not even then.
• 13:1713:17, 19 January 2011 diff hist −27‎ Minnie Driver ‎ Removes tag. A citation is not necessary for a statement that something is private (i.e., "not known"). If and when the contrary is proved true, it could easily be added here.
• 02:5202:52, 19 January 2011 diff hist −1‎ Talk:Type 88 75 mm AA gun ‎No edit summary
• 02:5202:52, 19 January 2011 diff hist +359‎ Talk:Type 88 75 mm AA gun ‎ Utility

18 January 2011

• 20:0320:03, 18 January 2011 diff hist −293‎ Karpoor Chandra Kulish ‎ trims minor WP:PEACOCK, trims minor unencyclopedic language. Removes invalid ref -- cannot be a search engine result (and it's broken, anyhow)
• 10:2810:28, 18 January 2011 diff hist +33‎ High-frequency trading ‎ Adds "misleading" tag. See discussion.
• 10:2610:26, 18 January 2011 diff hist +1,106‎ Talk:High-frequency trading ‎ Article needs review
• 10:1610:16, 18 January 2011 diff hist −928‎ High-frequency trading ‎ Rmv WP:OVERLINKING. Rmvs self-serving statements about popularity, not supported by supplied reference. Quote "hard data ...hard to find"
• 09:5909:59, 18 January 2011 diff hist −328‎ Fidessa ‎ Removes uncited claims about which companies are competition. Any company can claim to be competition. Tag: section blanking
• 09:5709:57, 18 January 2011 diff hist −352‎ Ultra-low latency direct market access ‎ Completes edit. Wikipedia is not a showcase for companies that choose to associate themselves with an article topic Tag: references removed
• 09:5609:56, 18 January 2011 diff hist −224‎ Ultra-low latency direct market access ‎ Removes blog reference, disallowed in Wikipedia. Removes "such as" WP:SPAM Tag: references removed

17 January 2011

• 01:5001:50, 17 January 2011 diff hist −87‎ Alec N. Wildenstein ‎ fixes WP:OVERLINKING

16 January 2011

• 21:2721:27, 16 January 2011 diff hist −559‎ Tanguy et Laverdure ‎ Removes WP:OVERLINKING. Style cleanup, especially uncited WP:PEACOCK. Removes blog references -- which are not allowed in Wiki Tag: references removed
• 17:1517:15, 16 January 2011 diff hist −34‎ East Asia (album) ‎ fix minor WP:OVERLINKING
• 00:0500:05, 16 January 2011 diff hist −131‎ John P. Craven ‎ I have his biography, none of the information in the article is particularly in question. Moved tag request for sources to lower in article where it's less intrusive. Remove WP:OVERLINKING

14 January 2011

• 09:4909:49, 14 January 2011 diff hist +267‎ Talk:Palacký University Olomouc ‎ fisheye distortion

12 January 2011

• 16:0416:04, 12 January 2011 diff hist −274‎ Kardamaina ‎ Copy edit poor, unencyclopedic language. Removes overt advertising, and catty implication that this is a male gay rendezvous

7 January 2011

• 15:3215:32, 7 January 2011 diff hist −93‎ Ann-Margret ‎ Removes one WP:SPAM external link. Wikipedia is not a linkfarm, or a promotional site, or a fan site. It's an encyclopedia.