Talk:False God (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Gained (talk · contribs) 12:46, 14 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 13:17, 16 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox looks good!
Remove close wikilink on riff per MOS:LINKSTYLE
Pipe music critics to Music journalism
"otherwise found it" → "otherwise found the song"
"Commercially "False God" peaked at number 56" → "Commercially, the song peaked at number 59"
List the full name of the ARIA Singles Chart
Mention that the certification was in Australia
"by its musical director" → "by the show's musical director" and mention the years of this performance and her tour
Mention Ryan Hurd's cover version
- I also included James Bay if that's okay. Gained (talk) 16:15, 16 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

The "love letter to love itself" quote is not mentioned by the source
"celebrity at the time" is not needed in the sentence since we know the media would be focused on her status and at the time is implied
Wouldn't the chart positions go better in a new para of reception, retitling to simply this word?
- Personally, I think they fit better with "Background and release" and I believe it's too short to a new paragraph for it on "Critical reception". I also think that section is very tightly focused so adding info about chart performance would kinda make it a bit unfocused and forced. Gained (talk) 16:52, 16 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
The correct Australia position is number 59, not 56

Audio sample looks good!
"in New York City, and" → "in New York City (NYC), and" per later instances appearing in the article
Pipe Michael Riddleberger to Bleachers (band)
"Sterling Sound in New York City." → "Sterling Sound in NYC."
Either remove the pipe on Evan Smith or send to Bleachers (band), not sure since they are already linked
"considered it "faux-R&B"." → "considered the song "faux-R&B"."
Re-invoke the Lipshutz ref for the slow jam sentence
Maybe only use the dash as 1980s R&B-influenced?
lovers' rock → lovers rock with the wikilink

First para looks good!
"using heaven imagery:" → "using heavenly imagery:"
"The couple encounters problems" → "The couple encounters challenges"
"to make amends but" → "to make amends, but"
"Religious imagery continue" → "Religious imagery continues"
"my hips"[31] and ultimately accepts" → "my hips",[31] ultimately accepting"
"the mentions of New York City and" → "the mentions of NYC and"
Maybe it would be suitable to mention "Cruel Summer" is from this album and the other two tracks are from 1989?

"called it a" → "called the song a"
Refinery29 should not be italicised
"to be confident that evoked" → "to have confidence that evoked" or something similar to be clear
"Lipshutz ranked it third among" → "Lipshutz ranked the song third among"
"Some critics regarded" → "A few critics regarded"
"and the New-York references ineffective but" → "and the NYC references ineffective, but"
"somewhat experimental production but" → "somewhat experimental production, but"

Img looks good!
The flat shoes are not sourced
"and "vibey" and highlighting" → "and "vibey", and highlighting"
"of the 45th Saturday Night Live season;" → "of the 45th SNL season;"
The one on guitar and one on piano throughout the tour is not sourced as far as I can see
"on the 53 U.S. dates,"
- Sorry what? Gained (talk) 16:02, 16 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
"The next year, she performed" → "In 2024, she performed"
Mention that James Bay sang the chorus as falsetto
"on his 2020 Platonic Tour: he replaced the" → "on his 2020 Platonic Tour, replacing the"

Copyvio score looks great at 28.1%!!!
Should Freezepage really be used for archiving on ref 15?
Cite Refinery29 as publisher instead on refs 34 and 36
- I don't believe I understand.. Gained (talk) 16:10, 16 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
Wikilink Taste of Country on ref 48 per MOS:LINK2SECT
Pipe Complex to Complex (magazine) on ref 49 per above

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; completed right on time! --K. Peake 15:16, 16 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hey @Kyle Peake! I have addressed all your points except those that I have comments above. Gained (talk) 16:16, 16 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
Gained Thank you and regarding the Refinery29 citations, change work to publisher and the 53 U.S. dates was added by accident from me. --K. Peake 17:14, 16 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Kyle Peake I believe everything's now addressed! Gained (talk) 04:56, 17 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
✓ Pass now, this is very good sorry I was busy yesterday outside of online usage! --K. Peake 08:07, 18 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hey @Kyle Peake! Thank you very much for the review but I think you forgot to pass the article? Gained (talk) 10:54, 18 April 2024 (UTC)Reply