User contributions for FT2

17 October 2024

• 02:4202:42, 17 October 2024 diff hist −17 Pre-trial detention →Detention during trial: simplify sentence and remove poor tone. If they served sentence length as remand, then they don't serve more after. Not "in some cases". this is usual. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit App section source

17 September 2024

• 11:4811:48, 17 September 2024 diff hist −6 The Bride (Kill Bill) →Influence on pop culture: improve section title - scientific names aren't "pop culture" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit App section source
• 11:4711:47, 17 September 2024 diff hist +1 m Cystomastacoides kiddo →Behaviour: tone: "literally" isn't needed. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit App section source

4 August 2024

• 09:1609:16, 4 August 2024 diff hist +313 Yips →In gymnastics Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

16 July 2024

• 22:2022:20, 16 July 2024 diff hist +740 Mary Roberts Rinehart correction, not believed to be the source. Just the earliest and best known early use

1 July 2024

• 19:5019:50, 1 July 2024 diff hist −9 Sunshine (2007 film) →Plot: reword a complex sentence to be simpler Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

18 June 2024

• 04:0704:07, 18 June 2024 diff hist +24 Quadrupedalism →Quadrupedal robots Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

25 May 2024

• 11:3211:32, 25 May 2024 diff hist −8 Chemical element →Description: combine 2 examples given, into one sentence rather than have an intervening sentence. no textual change Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 11:2111:21, 25 May 2024 diff hist +125 Chemical element →top: surely mentioned. the word or concept "isotope" in the intro, however briefly? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 11:1511:15, 25 May 2024 diff hist +24 Chemical element →top: clearer Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 11:1011:10, 25 May 2024 diff hist +51 Chemical element →top: poor wording, could be read as implying molecules are only "2 or more atoms of the same kind", by some readers. Reword to avoid that. and be clearer Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

6 May 2024

• 09:1109:11, 6 May 2024 diff hist +12 m Wiles's proof of Fermat's Last Theorem →top Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

12 March 2024

• 06:5406:54, 12 March 2024 diff hist +236 Pirates of the Caribbean: At World's End →Plot: small c/e improvements Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

3 March 2024

• 17:0017:00, 3 March 2024 diff hist +47 Longtermism →See also: Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 17:0017:00, 3 March 2024 diff hist +47 Long Now Foundation →See also: Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 16:5916:59, 3 March 2024 diff hist +47 Deep time →See also: Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 16:5616:56, 3 March 2024 diff hist +18 m Long-term nuclear waste warning messages →See also: Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 16:5516:55, 3 March 2024 diff hist +15 m Long-term nuclear waste warning messages →See also: Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

9 February 2024

• 09:5209:52, 9 February 2024 diff hist +31 British Post Office scandal →Call for reform on digital evidence: clarify a sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 09:4709:47, 9 February 2024 diff hist +164 British Post Office scandal →top: capture - mention Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

8 January 2024

• 21:4121:41, 8 January 2024 diff hist +1 British Post Office scandal →Post Office and Fujitsu conduct =
• 21:4121:41, 8 January 2024 diff hist +3,819 British Post Office scandal Revert [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=prev&oldid=1194409120 this edit] by User:Southdevonian. 1/ States "see talk page" but no reason (or good reason) posted for removal. 2/ Material is concise organised and salient, Post Office conduct as a prosecutor is at the heart of the scandal and omitted in the text about the scandal. 3/ A brief 2 line summary is not appropriate for this point.
• 21:3421:34, 8 January 2024 diff hist +432 British Post Office scandal →Timeline of events: pilot prosecutions
• 21:2321:23, 8 January 2024 diff hist +40 British Post Office scandal →Post Office and Fujitsu conduct Tag: Reverted
• 21:2221:22, 8 January 2024 diff hist +14 m British Post Office scandal →Post Office and Fujitsu conduct Tag: Reverted
• 21:2021:20, 8 January 2024 diff hist +10 British Post Office scandal →Post Office and Fujitsu conduct Tag: Reverted
• 21:1921:19, 8 January 2024 diff hist +536 British Post Office scandal →Post Office and Fujitsu conduct: update Tag: Reverted
• 21:1521:15, 8 January 2024 diff hist +3,222 British Post Office scandal Add section on procedural injustices - the Tag: Reverted

2 January 2024

• 08:5508:55, 2 January 2024 diff hist +117 Bear Grylls →top: a few things should really be mentioned in the intro. Brief mentions only though. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

2 December 2023

• 02:1702:17, 2 December 2023 diff hist +27 Jungle Cruise (film) →Cast Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 02:1402:14, 2 December 2023 diff hist −150 Jungle Cruise (film) →Plot: a few copyedits to improve the plot summary. also remove a little excessive detail. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

26 November 2023

• 20:2620:26, 26 November 2023 diff hist +186 Spoon theory →Chronic illness and spoon theory Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 19:2619:26, 26 November 2023 diff hist +17 Spoon theory →top: nationality is useful here Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

18 November 2023

• 12:5412:54, 18 November 2023 diff hist +11 Superflare →Effects of a hypothetical solar superflare: ”would be catastrophic"... " serious damage". Can we actually be specific here from sources, what these words mean here? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 12:4712:47, 18 November 2023 diff hist +2 Superflare →Kepler discoveries: surely stellar not solar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

9 November 2023

• 04:4504:45, 9 November 2023 diff hist +63 Sexuality and the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints →Chastity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 03:1803:18, 9 November 2023 diff hist +84 The Book of Mormon (musical) →Synopsis: c/e Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

8 November 2023

• 13:5613:56, 8 November 2023 diff hist +3 November 2023 Ohio Issue 1 →top: change some present tense to task tense,and we use "no" campaign not "against" campaign in all but one places so make consistent. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 08:0008:00, 8 November 2023 diff hist +784 The Book of Mormon (musical) →History: 2020 revisions really are a part of its history too. Mention here. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit Disambiguation links added
• 07:4307:43, 8 November 2023 diff hist +22 The Book of Mormon (musical) →Reception: name link Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 07:1207:12, 8 November 2023 diff hist +26 m The Book of Mormon (musical) →Synopsis: Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 07:0707:07, 8 November 2023 diff hist +132 The Book of Mormon (musical) →Synopsis: various minor c/e Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

3 November 2023

• 17:0117:01, 3 November 2023 diff hist +61 Metoidioplasty →top: 1/ fox link, 2/ clarify 2 or 3 technical terms for lay readers Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

8 October 2023

• 01:3101:31, 8 October 2023 diff hist +693 English defamation law Accuracy and omitted re title

22 September 2023

• 12:4612:46, 22 September 2023 diff hist +456 Grooming →Localised Grooming: "sensational" suggested sensationalised, which we now know wasnt so, they were sadly accurate. refactored the section, added some more info. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

21 September 2023

• 16:3516:35, 21 September 2023 diff hist +14 List of Internet top-level domains →Original top-level domains: .gov - "Entity"states "US govt agencies and use" but "Notes" suggest any governmental agencies (of any country) Adding "United States" there so its not unclear on a quick read, as ".gov" isnt used by other governments

2 September 2023

• 09:2409:24, 2 September 2023 diff hist +1 Incel →top: split para for readability
• 09:2209:22, 2 September 2023 diff hist +29 Incel →top: +item
• 09:2109:21, 2 September 2023 diff hist +261 Incel →top: add an item
• 08:0808:08, 2 September 2023 diff hist +1,027 Incel →top: c/e and cites