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Neutrality

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Hi, It looks like this article is lacking the neutrality of a Wikipedia page, so I've added a POV tag. More precisely, it looks like the website for the facility, especially with the pronoun "we". Some passages which should be rewritten :

the ADFH has established a loyal and a wide patient-base

we have opened the falcon hospital

DFH has highly successfully entered the field of leisure and MICE tourism by tremendous increases in tourists who have joined Falcon World Tour

For its excellent tourism program, service quality and business prestige, ADFH has been awarded many awards and recognition from Europe and USA

JuliusSimplus (talk) 08:46, 14 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]