Talk:Killian Hayes

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:12, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:12, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• "but grew up in France due to his father's professional career." - Delink France per MOS:OVERLINK
• "He debuted for Cholet's senior team at age 16 before efore receiving regular playing time in the following season." - the word denoted in bold should be deleted

• Wikilink points, assists and steals to their respective articles on the first time they are mentioned in the article
• "and often playing pick-up games in Lakeland and Orlando, Florida in the summer." - don't use seasons per MOS:SEASON
• "Hayes watched highlights on YouTube," - highlights of basketball games on
• Wikilink college basketball
• "sharing MVP honors with Addison Patterson," - spell out MVP on its first mention in the prose and put the acronyms in parentheses

• "After his team was last-place in its league early in the season," - last place is not hyphenated
• "At 2019 NBA All-Star Weekend in Charlotte, North Carolina in February, he competed at the Basketball Without Borders camp." - clarify that it was Hayes' second time at the camp

• "six assists and eight turnovers in a win over Rasta Vechta." - Südwestrundfunk does not state that Hayes had eight turnovers in that game
• "chipping in eight points, nine assists and three steals" - try not to use wording such as "chipping in"
• "He recorded 20 points, 10 assists and four rebounds on 11 February in a 112–106 overtime loss to Alba Berlin." - the phrase "on 11 February" can be moved to the end of this sentence
• Also, the EuroHoops citation attached to the sentence above doesn't mention that Hayes had four rebounds in this particular game

• Delink Argentina per MOS:OVERLINK
• "he received a six-game suspension by the French Federation of Basketball" - reword this sentence so it passes WP:LIMITED since it is too close to the EuroHoops source that is used to verify it

• "although he is not regarded as an extraordinary athlete." - regarded by whom exactly?

• "Hayes is the son of Sandrine (née Demiannay) and DeRon Hayes. He has an American father, DeRon Hayes" - this text should be shortened to mention his father only once
• Delink the second mention of Cholet

• Reference 6 should mention that the source is written in French
• Reference 9 is missing the author of the article
• The work of Reference 39 should be changed from Quest-France.fr to just Quest-France

Am going to place the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to all of the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 15:02, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: All comments have been addressed. Sportzeditz (talk) 15:44, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Sportzeditz: Now promoting to GA class. I have made two changes to the article. MWright96 (talk) 16:11, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]