Talk:Russian monitor Uragan

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 03:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Images are properly licensed Y
• No DAB links Y
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• "During Uragan's sea trials on 31 May 1865, she reached a maximum speed of 6.5 knots (12.0 km/h; 7.5 mph), one of the faster ships in her class." Perhaps "During Uragan's sea trials on 31 May 1865, she reached a maximum speed of 6.5 knots (12.0 km/h; 7.5 mph), making her one of the faster ships in her class."
  • Good idea.
• " but Uragan was modified for the addition of 0.5-inch (12.7 mm) armor plates after completion. It is, however, unknown if they were ever fitted, although they were manufactured and then placed in storage." Somewhat confusing perhaps: "but Uragan was modified, so as to be ready for the addition of 0.5-inch (12.7 mm) armor plates after completion. It is, however, unknown if they were ever fitted, although they were manufactured and then placed in storage."
  • I used slightly different wording, but your idea is sound.
• That is all. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 03:13, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:21, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

    All is good, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:37, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]