User:JakeKalp/Evaluate an Article
Evaluate an article
Complete your article evaluation below. Here are the key aspects to consider: Lead sectionA good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview. A reader who just wants to identify the topic can read the first sentence. A reader who wants a very brief overview of the most important things about it can read the first paragraph. A reader who wants a quick overview can read the whole lead section.
ContentA good Wikipedia article should cover all the important aspects of a topic, without putting too much weight on one part while neglecting another.
Tone and BalanceWikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view; if there are substantial differences of interpretation or controversies among published, reliable sources, those views should be described as fairly as possible.
Sources and ReferencesA Wikipedia article should be based on the best sources available for the topic at hand. When possible, this means academic and peer-reviewed publications or scholarly books.
Organization and writing qualityThe writing should be clear and professional, the content should be organized sensibly into sections.
Images and Media
Talk page discussionThe article's talk page — and any discussions among other Wikipedia editors that have been taking place there — can be a useful window into the state of an article, and might help you focus on important aspects that you didn't think of.
Overall impressions
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved. |
Which article are you evaluating?
[edit]Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
[edit]I chose this article because I looked through articles that were related to Linguistic Anthropology. The title of the article was interesting, because violence is interpreted differently in an artistic manner.
Evaluate the article
[edit]At the start of the article, there are things that are wrong with the article. The article is difficult to understand, especially at the beginning. For instance the lead section of this article is depicted to be a personal essay, it takes a while for certain parts of the article are mentioned in the lead section. The article does not contain up-to-date information, with the most recent reference being from a few years ago. This is coming from a neutral point of view, with relevant information cited from people that are involved in the article. Although most of the references are backed up from a reliable secondary source, not all of the sources come from an organizational or educational source, with an introductory essay from a user source being mentioned in the article. Fortunately the links of the references do work when clicked on. The article is easy to read, with references from popular culture to explain subjects that are mentioned. It is broken down for the reader to understand what the article entails, and it furthermore breaks down into sub-sections to specify how each sections is relevant to the article. The images are well-captioned, showing a good description on what each photo is. The talk page is extensive with information from fellow editors, and provided information for better understand certain parts of the article that may not have been mentioned in the article itself.
The article overall is good in terms of providing the necessary information to understand the article. Some of the strengths include the article goes in detail on how certain things are integrated into the article. The photos give the reader a visual towards seeing how they are related to the article. Some things that could be improved include making the introduction succinct and concise, while giving the necessary information for the reader to understand what is going on in the article. The article is well-developed, although there is room for edits to make the article better.